Sunday, November 29, 2009
Rough Weekend
Sunday, November 22, 2009
Only Two Days
Sunday, November 15, 2009
There is a Whole World to Explore
I really enjoyed read Pamela Gardners’ paper. She goes into great deal with her trip to Brazil. It was just an all around good written paper. I also think that she picked the perfect pictures. The pictures made her paper multimodal and also give her audience a visual. This paper is not the normal 5 paragraph paper that most people are used to reading. It is more like she is telling you the story at the same time you are looking at a photo album. Overall I would give this paper a 5 out of 6, mainly because at some points she talks a little too much about unimportant things. And I feel that she might have lost some of her audience. But, the paper still has everything it needs such as; a title, a work cited page, and great flow. She went from one paragraph to with next very nicely. You can just tell that she took her time and did the research that she needed to complete this paper. I would say that it is a portfolio ready paper.
Monday, November 9, 2009
One on One
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Saved By The Alarm
Sunday, October 25, 2009
Nervous
Friday, October 16, 2009
Dena Dobrzykowski
Once upon a time I met this girl named Dena Dobrzykowski. We met because we are partners for a project in our English class. We have to present our projected next Wednesday. And we have really done anything because Dena is never here. She always sleeps through her alarm. When she is here you can tell she have a rough, crazy night. It just looks like she should be sleeping whatever she did the night before off. But I think Dena and I have wasted enough time, and that we should start thinking about our project. So Dena Dobrzykowski, lets get started on our project.